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dai ki bajai
Hi exbii lovers i am starting a new thread which is based on the true story of my close friend from a village in rajisthan. the characters of the story are as follows
hema : a loving mother 38 years of age, moti bhare badan wali aurat kanta : village dai maa, hasthini , bade badan ki malkin seema : Kanta ki badi beti, do maheene pehle hi hari hui hai, pati truck driver. raman: kanta ka iklauta beta, balisht kasrat wala shareer,badi aur choti dono umer ke auraton ka shaukeen, maa ka dulara aur behanon ka pyara. Din mein seher mein naukari ki talaash, raat ko sharab aur ghar ki auroton ka jism aur shabab. lakshmi: kanta ki choti beti, school mein padhti hai, umer 19 saal, maa ki dulari, choti thodi moti aur puri tarah gadrayi huyi pushpa: hema ke ghar ki naukraani, umer 30 saal , gatheela kasa hua badan, thodi sawli , pati sharabi raju : hema ka beta ,mera dost kahani is prakaar shuru hui raju ka parivaar gaon ka sabse samriddh parivaar tha, raju sheher mein mere saath padta tha, par baap ke achanak dehaant hone ke karan use gaon vaapis jana pada aur ghar aur jaydaad ki jimmedari sambhalni padi. Hema ne bhi apni jindagi ko sambhala aur ghar ke kaam mein jut gayi, pushpa jo ki kai saalon sa ghar mein kaam karti thi uski har baat mein madad karti, pushpa bhi majboori mein yeh kaam kar rahi thi kyonki usksa pati sharai tha aur use ghar chalane ke liye paise nahin deta tha. Raju ke ghar waapis ane se sab khush the. Raju ghar se hi apna kaam karta tha, ek din jab woh naha ke bathroom se nikal raha tha to uska pair fisal gaya aur woh jor se neeche gir gaya, awaaz sun kar pushpa daudi chali aaye aur raju ko puchne lagi , bhiya kya hua raju ki kamar mein chot aye thi to usne apni kamar ki taraf ishaara kar diya pushpa ne apne kandhe ka sahara diya aur raju ko uske bedroom mein le gayi bistar par itane ke baad woh hema yani raju ki maa ko bulane chali gaye par raju ki maa bazaar gayi hui thi pushpa ne fatafat moo ki tube nikali aur raju ke kamre mein gayi raju abhi bhi dard se karha raha tha aur badan par sirf ek towel pehen ke bistar par pada tha pushpa boli bhaiya kahan lagi hai raju ne towel neeche kiya aur apni kamar ki taraf ishaara kara pushpa ne wahin alm lagana shuru kar diya puspa is tarah jhuk ke malish kar rahi thi ki uski sudoul aor mansal stan raju ke aankhon ke samne the, pushpa thi to 30 ki par kyonki abhi tak hari nahin hui thi to badan mein ek kunwari jaisa kasav tha, gaeeb hone ke karan woh blouse ke neeche bra bhi nahi pehenti thi aaj usne peela rang ka blouse pehna tha jismein uske sanwle badan ka rang khil raha tha,thodi der mein rahu ka lund phunkarne laga aur towel mein pura tambu ke jaise tanna gaya, jab pushpa ki nazar us pe padi to woh hairaan reh gayi ki us kaamwali ke sparsh se raju bhiya uttejit ho rahen hai usne raju se pucha bhaiya kuch araam mila raju: didi thodi der aur karo tab achanak hema kamre mein aye aur hairaan hoke sara nazara dehne lagi pushpa uske ud nange bete ki kamar par maalish kar rahi thi aur raju apne haath se amne lund ko towel ke neeche masal raha tha pushpa ko nahin pata tha ki raju apne supae se khel raha hai kyonki raju ki peeth uski taraf thi par hema ye sab dekh rahi thi aur kamre mein ghus gayi pushpa : didi dekho bhiya ko kitni chot lagi hai, bathroom se bahar aate samay fisal gaye the hema: raju bete kya hua raju: apne tane hue lund ko chupata hua, maa fisal gaya tha, ab theek hai hema: theek kahan hai aa mujhe bhi dekha hema ne jat se raju ke badan se towel kheench liya achanak kamre mein sannata cha gaya dono auraton ka mooh khula , aankhen chaudi aur saath mein ek aah nikli (hai raam, itna bada moosal) hema ne khud ko sambhala aur towel raju ke uper dalte hue boli beta ab tu aaram kar dono auraten kamre se bahar to aa gayi par jo unhone dekha voh abhi bhi unki aankhon ke samne tha pushpa to jaise sadme mein thi uska pati jo ki ek sharabi tha voh to apni lulli ko dhang se khada bhi nahin kar pata tha aur ab jab asne pehli baar ek asli marad ka auzaar dekha to o dang rah gayi gol supada jaise koi fal neeche fanfanate saanp ke jaisa mota lund jiski uttejit nasen saaf nazar aa rahi thi lambai itni ki kisi bhi aurat ko aurat hone ka matlab samjha sake niche bilkul sudoul tatte jinme jawani ka ras barsane ki takat saaf nazar aa rahi thi hema ne pushpa ki haalt dekhi aur boli hema: pushpa kya sooch rahi hai pushpa: nahin malkin kuch nahin bas sooch rahi thi ki bhiya ko ek baar davai puch ke aati hoon hema: rehne de ghar ka pur kaam baki pada hai mein dekh aati hoon pushpa ka man ab machal chuka tha par usko maaloom tha ki voh ek naukrani hai aur hema ka parivaar gaon ka sabse amir ghe tha, voh kaam mein lag gayi plz dont use underage characters in your story... take this as warning xyster Last edited by besthusbands : 19th October 2011 at 01:48 PM. |
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update
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hahaha.. good drama kind narration...
milte hain break ke baad.. bhai continue.. |
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is this a ral story or fake...plz write in english
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doosra din
hema ne kal uski jawani ki takat ko apni aankhon se dekha tha aur o janti thi ki ab uska beta shadi ke liye puri tarah tayaar hai, par ghar aur pandit ka kannon tha ki pita ki maut ke baad teen saal ka intezaar karna jaruri hai hema soch mein pa gayi aur pushpa ko boli pushpa beti jara dai ko bolna mujh se aa ke milegi jaruri kaam hai |
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kant dai
Kanta dai ko jab pushpa mili to kanta ne pucha
kanta: pushpa beti kaisi hai, pati theek hai pushpa: dai maa aap to sab janti hai, aapne uski agar sahi maalish kari hoti to shayad main bhi hari ho jati, doodhiya leti ek puri aurat ho jati kanta: beti chinta mat kar is saal teri yeh tangi ka ilaaj dhoond lungi pushpa: kaise dai kanta: tu abhi jawan hai , dekh kitna sudoul badan hai, kasi kasi rane, mansal jhanghen , bhari hui chati aur bade kuhle, tujhe to hari karne ke liya mard dhoondna mushkil nahi hoga beti pushpa sharmate hue, aap bhi na dai maa jhooti tareef karne mein maahir ho kanta: apne blouse ki taraf ishaara kar ke, dekh kaise dhal gayen hain chaar bachhe ke baad , aur tera seena dekh, bilkul sudoul, chal zara blouse utaar teri maalish kar deti hoon pushpa: dai maa hema didi ne bulaya hai aapko aur aap ho ki meri kahani mein fans gayi kanta: beti kuch khas hai kya , hema to mujhse kabi nahi maalish nahi karati pushpa: dai maa voh unka beta seher se .... kanta: accha jawan ladka dekh liya is liye paniya rahi hai, chal zara bata to kaisa hai ab, maine bachpan mein khub maalish kari hai uski pushpa: chehra laal, kya dai kuch bhi bolti , kahan mai ek garib naukrani aur kahan oh seth ka beta kanta: hai to marad hi, ragdega to aurat ko hi, uski nazar nahin padi teri karari jawani par, tere seene par nahin padi uski nazar, itne bade nipple to mujko yahan se bhi saaf dikh rahe hai blouse ke under, aise hi kaam par jati hai bina bra ke pushpa: dai aur mat chedo, mujhe bhala kaun dekhe ga kanta: chal blouse khol mujhe to dikha de , thoda masal ke tujhe paniya deti hoon , bade dino baad ghar ayi hai tab tak kanta ki beti school se vaapis aa gayi aur maa se aa ke lipat gayi Last edited by besthusbands : 22nd July 2011 at 01:12 PM. |
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lakshmi
umer 19 saal par jism aise bhara aur gadraya huwa jaise ki puri jawan aurat, apni maa ki tarah khoobsoorat , thoda wajan jyada tha par uss par accha lagta tha
School dress mein uski khubsoorati dekhte hi banti thi mansal rane aur jhaghen skirt mein aur bhari nitamb school shirt mein kaid bade sunder lagte the . Uske school (girls school) ki lady teachers ka bhi man use dekh ke dol jata tha aur woh use aksar apne ghar maalish ke liye bulaati thi. Kanta ka pura parivaar, betiyan aur bahu sab maalish ka kaam karte the aur yeh hi unki rozi roti thi ![]() Last edited by besthusbands : 15th October 2011 at 10:23 AM. Reason: ua age edited |
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aage ki kahani
Lakshmi ne pushpa ko dekha aur boli
lakshmi: namste pushpa didi , kaisi ho pushpa: theek hoon beti , to to badi ho gay hai re, kameez bhi tight lag rahi hai, kori hai ya maza le rahi hai, hansne lagi kanta: chal hat sali, ahi to yeh maal khas tayaar ho raha hai, dekh kaise gudaj ho gai hai abhi se, rane dekh school skirt mein kasi khoob lag rahi hai,seena to tere ko bhi paseena chudwa dega, dekhegi?? kanta ne apni beti ki school shirt ke uper ishara karte hue kaha pushpa: dai apke haath mein to jaado hai, malish kar ke apni beti ko aisa abhi se ana diya, bistar par nangee hokar jab kisi mard ko apni kasi hui bacchi chut ka darshan degi to mard vaise hi jhad jayege kanta: chalo dodo apne blouse utaroo aaj dekhen kamsin school ki ladki aur 30 saal ki aurat ke jism ka anter, chal beti nangi ho ja aur rasoi se tel le aa pushpa: dai aaj chalti hoon phir kabhi naap lena meri jawni ki gehrayi, ho sake to mere liya ek asli jude ka intezaam kar dena, varna yeh jawan badan kiss kaam ka pushpa uthne lagi fir achanak uski nazar lakshmi par padi jo ki apne kapde utaar kar sirf skirt pehni the pushpa ke mooh mein pani aa gaya , 19 saal ki bacchi , bade sudoul stan, jo ahi jhoothe nahin hue the toote nahin the, payre pink nipple , pushpa ne socha aak ruk ke dai ke saath is kori jawani ka rus pee hi loon kanta: kya hue pushpa beti, ho gayi tabiyat hari, chal utar de apna blouse aur kapde aur dono mere samne aa jao.. c chalo jaldi karo Last edited by besthusbands : 15th October 2011 at 10:27 AM. |
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nice
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good keep writing
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