[KaranMalhotra]

Good job...carry on!

[KaranMalhotra]

Vaise virendra aur ashna me age gap 33-20=13 ek bhai behan ke liye kuch jyada nahi ho gaya ?

[sam0023]

nice story started dear....!
Keep updating regularly...!
Hum sabr kar lenge...es lambi story k liye.....!
make it more & more erotic.....hindi ki galtiya maf hai...discription achhe se karna....!
waiting for nxt update...!

[awara.desi]

Fast update yaar....

[awara.desi]

Kab Rakehegi Apne Bhiya ka khyaal.....

[kumar_jai]

for new story nd plz regular update dijiye

[triveni_Vijay]

Originally Posted by VIJAY94620

mast story ji

Thanks for encouragement

Originally Posted by sidd007

nice start

Thanks Sidd007

Originally Posted by saif143

Nice start...congrats for new story...waiting for next.

Thanks for appreciation. Next update on sunday

Originally Posted by coolamy_11

NICE START.........CARRY ON..........

Thanks. I will carry on on Sunday

Originally Posted by Zaspreet

for the new storyyy. nice start

Thanks for rep. Zaspreet

Originally Posted by EyeOfAadi

congrats for the story..... i hope u get gd response from everyone..

Thanks for encouragement and Thanks for ur hope

Originally Posted by awara.desi

Good start but update fast... otherwise phir interest brake ho jaata hai....

Interest break nahi hoga. Updates regular dene ki puri koshish hogi.

Originally Posted by DaringAkki

Suruaat bata rahi hai ki ye ek behtreen kahani sabit hogi..
Waiting for update..

Apne se puri koshish rahegi ke yeh kahani ek behatreen story banegi. Bas aap viewers ka sath chaiye.

[ptfbd]

nice start

[triveni_Vijay]

Originally Posted by KaranMalhotra

Good job...carry on!

Thakns Karan

Originally Posted by KaranMalhotra

Vaise virendra aur ashna me age gap 33-20=13 ek bhai behan ke liye kuch jyada nahi ho gaya ?

Second update padho Karan ji, you will get your answer.

Originally Posted by sam0023

nice story started dear....!
Keep updating regularly...!
Hum sabr kar lenge...es lambi story k liye.....!
make it more & more erotic.....hindi ki galtiya maf hai...discription achhe se karna....!
waiting for nxt update...!

Thanks for these words & i will try to keep updating regularly.

Originally Posted by awara.desi

Fast update yaar....
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Nice image

Originally Posted by awara.desi

Kab Rakehegi Apne Bhiya ka khyaal.....
Sabar ka fal meetha hota hai.
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Nice image and lines.

Originally Posted by kumar_jai

for new story nd plz regular update dijiye

Thanks for appreciation And i will try to update regularly.

[KaranMalhotra]

Solid start...lagta hai incest ke saath ek badhiya plot bhi hai is kahani me...